i want a sweet girl frndEspecially if you write in the present tense, second person allows the reader to experience the story as if it’s their own. To avoid a “choose your own adventure” feel or an a
Bilal Saqi: hai...
Cherchant: Femelle âge 18 à 43
Statut: 27 Unique Pas de réponse Mâle
Emplacement:
Intérêt dans: Partenaire d'activité
Ethnicité asiatique
Vivant: Vis avec les parents
Attire l'attention: Bras
La taille: 5'3 pouces
Corps: Maigre
Cheveux/Yeux: marron, Noir
Fumée: En aucune façon
Boisson: Ne jamais le toucher
Exercice 2 fois par semaine
Politique: Pas de réponse
Éducation: Décrochage scolaire
Religion: Agnostique
Le revenu: 15 001 $à 25 000 $
Occupation: Bachi Set Krna
Progéniture: Aucun
Personnalité: Aventureux
Pays: Pakistan
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i want a sweet girl frndEspecially if you write in the present tense, second person allows the reader to experience the story as if it’s their own. To avoid a “choose your own adventure” feel or an aggressive tone, mix up sentence structure and add in description and dialogue. Using the pronoun “you” and describing action as it happens supplies a personal sense of urgency, propelling the story—and the reader—forward.Example You’re late. Heart pounding, you race up the stairs as the train enters the station. You weave around the slowmoving people milling on the platform and dash towards the train, throwing your body through the doorway with only a moment to spare.

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